OMG (ohmygoddess)! Look at Crimsoncrow's Enid story! Hit "comments" under my "biting commentary" post and you can read it. Very good! You gotta love a naked she-vamp in a chocolate jag (as long as she's already eaten). ;)
I think I will let crimsoncrow's ending stand. I have a different direction in mind that will make it a much longer piece. But I'm definitely keeping the Jaguar!